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Author:  Arcadia [ Tue Sep 02, 2008 5:34 pm ]
Post subject:  dm_trownin
hi ich bin neu hier und hab auch gleich meine map mitgenommen^^ ist sozusagen erst gestern fertig geworden

screenshots könnte ich nachliefern aber die besonderheit ist nicht durch bilder zu zeigen. es gibt 6 geheimnisse

1 davon führt in den privatraum.

[url]http://www.file-upload.net/download-1085106/dm_trownin.bsp.html[/url]

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hi i am new here and have taken my map with me^^ it is finished just yesterday

i could upload some screenshots if u want but the special thing of the map is his secrets. they r 6

1 is for the private room

[url]http://www.file-upload.net/download-1085106/dm_trownin.bsp.html[/url]
Author:  Smartzenegger [ Tue Sep 02, 2008 6:42 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: dm_trownin
[quote="Arcadia"]hi ich bin neu hier und hab auch gleich meine map mitgenommen^^ ist sozusagen erst gestern fertig geworden

screenshots könnte ich nachliefern aber die besonderheit ist nicht durch bilder zu zeigen. es gibt 6 geheimnisse

1 davon führt in den privatraum.

[url]http://www.file-upload.net/download-1085106/dm_trownin.bsp.html[/url][/quote]


hi.

dich bin neu hier?
hast auch gleich zeine map mitgenommen?
wiebiete: sozusagen fertig geworden gestern erst shitze was?

wo sehen die screenskots?
knötte pich vieze nicht durch bananen-schilder zteiger sez halflife 2 gibs in 6 packs geheimnisse ala missionaris.
also, stomme ader slang in gesonderhelft dier nachliefern bitcst.

for die führter in one devil den morivatarium 2 processors.

is this it???

dan alles liever in nelerdans graag.

xi ook geen screenshotjes, dat sucks dus fucking fet!
vertzelle uber die mapfke, ien konijne duitzliche tzahlen kgrahage!
danko.
Author:  Arcadia [ Tue Sep 02, 2008 9:09 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: dm_trownin
oh fuck XD i was on a german form before sorry i translate ^^

hi i am new here and have taken my map with me^^ it is finished just yesterday

i could upload some screenshots if u want but the special thing of the map is his secrets. they r 6

1 is for the private room

[url]http://www.file-upload.net/download-1085106/dm_trownin.bsp.html[/url]

i was just to excited^^
Author:  Smartzenegger [ Wed Sep 03, 2008 1:09 am ]
Post subject:  Re: dm_trownin
[quote="Arcadia"]oh fuck XD i was on a german form before sorry i translate ^^

hi i am new here and have taken my map with me^^ it is finished just yesterday

i could upload some screenshots if u want but the special thing of the map is his secrets. they r 6

1 is for the private room

[url]http://www.file-upload.net/download-1085106/dm_trownin.bsp.html[/url]

i was just to excited^^[/quote]

oh its ok.
i know my site sounds german, but it isn't.

i'll give your map a go tomorow, now i dont have the time for it.
i'll let you know what i think of it.
to bad about the missing screenshots.
anyway, thank you for your contribution of your map.
great to have another mapper aboard.
Author:  Smartzenegger [ Wed Sep 03, 2008 1:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: dm_trownin
ok, here is what i think of it:

what is this map really about?
it is a deathmatch map i presume because its called dm_...
as for the looks, you could better call it dm_chambers or dm_corridoric or dm_corridoria.
only thing i see is chambers and corridors, with a few shapes with a few different textures on them.
and where is the control room?
and where to find the code, and what good does it get you if you have the code???
i guess i need answers to these questions before i really want to say anymore.
because so far, it isn't the worst map i have seen, but also not the best.
hopefully you appreciate my honesty, and i would like to know more about the thoughts behind your project to better understand what its really about.
Author:  Arcadia [ Wed Sep 03, 2008 5:49 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: dm_trownin
well i know its not the best. its my first ttry, and yes its a deathmatch map.

well the priv room has a monitor with many cams. you can see everythin with them.

its hidden (no selflighttextur, lights off)

the passcode is in the 5 secret rooms

the priv room has 6 teleporters to the 6 secrets.

and the name^^ i already send it to many people so i cant chage it now^^

(there is one light bug in the priv room [disco redlight] i didn't know how to fix it but i thought the main thing is dm anyway so its not that serious)

i would like to show u the secrets, becouse some doors are special

ah and the 5 secretrooms have ammo and health in them

if u know how to use them, you can surprise your enemy kill him and disapper again.

this is what is behind of the map.

some of the secrets r good 4 hunting and run. how to discribe. if the hunted gets in and the hunter too, there r chances where the hunted can escape (teleporter with shild but hole on top [nades], holes where u can jump in or klib up (it was cool when i played with my friend and he jumped in the hole and me too with a shotgun just before i landet i shot in the exit and he did [ it was just luke]) well its hard to show with words. i have to show u it in-game
Author:  Smartzenegger [ Wed Sep 03, 2008 6:32 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: dm_trownin
[quote="Arcadia"]well i know its not the best. its my first ttry, and yes its a deathmatch map.

well the priv room has a monitor with many cams. you can see everythin with them.

its hidden (no selflighttextur, lights off)

the passcode is in the 5 secret rooms

the priv room has 6 teleporters to the 6 secrets.

and the name^^ i already send it to many people so i cant chage it now^^

(there is one light bug in the priv room [disco redlight] i didn't know how to fix it but i thought the main thing is dm anyway so its not that serious)

i would like to show u the secrets, becouse some doors are special

ah and the 5 secretrooms have ammo and health in them

if u know how to use them, you can surprise your enemy kill him and disapper again.

this is what is behind of the map.

some of the secrets r good 4 hunting and run. how to discribe. if the hunted gets in and the hunter too, there r chances where the hunted can escape (teleporter with shild but hole on top [nades], holes where u can jump in or klib up (it was cool when i played with my friend and he jumped in the hole and me too with a shotgun just before i landet i shot in the exit and he did [ it was just luke]) well its hard to show with words. i have to show u it in-game[/quote]

those are all nice ideas.
but what is meant to be, isn't very clear for the new coming players.
also, the map isn't themed to anything. i mean, there is nothing to see.
and with such little ammo, lots of players are wondering arround without ammo soon.
and how can you hide from someone who can chase you the same way too?

you should try to create a new kind of killbox dm map.
you know killbox? i once had some ideas to make that map nice.
maybe its also a good thing to try.
i see you already think ahead, and dont think limited.
that is a very very good quality of you. :D
but i need good looking maps to play in.
otherwise i get boored very soon. :(
all i am saying, this map needs a little more work, and try to make things more clear for how its meant to be played.
you could draw a map as texture and hint the players of what is where and what they can expect or try to do.
the ramp in one room reminded me of quake3 defrag. was it meant to be like that?
Author:  Arcadia [ Thu Sep 04, 2008 1:24 am ]
Post subject:  Re: dm_trownin
in one thing you r right. i hade to write something like "there r 5 secrets"

for the rest. ammo is enaugh there, u cant camp in this map u have to be in move. so u never go out of ammo. in every room there is ammo and weapons in the corners.

the details... well i consetrate on the secrets and the dm part. as for me the map should be balanced and not pretty. this is no rp or gm map. but i understand u.

well like i said its my first map.

i hope tha map doesn't die becouse i forgot the massage ....

well shit happans -.-
Author:  Smartzenegger [ Thu Sep 04, 2008 2:54 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: dm_trownin
[quote="Arcadia"]in one thing you r right. i hade to write something like "there r 5 secrets"

for the rest. ammo is enaugh there, u cant camp in this map u have to be in move. so u never go out of ammo. in every room there is ammo and weapons in the corners.

the details... well i consetrate on the secrets and the dm part. as for me the map should be balanced and not pretty. this is no rp or gm map. but i understand u.

well like i said its my first map.

i hope tha map doesn't die becouse i forgot the massage ....

well shit happans -.-[/quote]

well, you can always release an update. just put hints all over the map where needed.
and try to make the buttons a bit bigger, so you can see them well enough.
and dress up the wall a little more with posters or whatever, just do your thing with your map, that is the most important.
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